Where is the book title in this blurb? The reason it doesn't jump out at you is because it isn't italicized. Titles MUST be italicized. It's a rule with a reason.
Also, fwiw, I don't like the new mechanism for inserting pics. It is confusing and it doesn't work. I deliberately attempted to insert the pic under my comment. Why did it insert above it? Why don't new things...so-called improvements...ever seem to work?
Why don't new things...so-called improvements...ever seem to work?
I invented the term ''akwardization'' for just this thing. At work. I saw something new introduced, +, many times the resulting inefficiency would be worth a chuckle. Except, people who actually worked with the new system, were disadvantaged by the new, supposedly better, way. So, the continuing results were inefficient, + sometimes even dangerous out on the shop floor.
Another example. One has to book online for time in the local swimming pool. Wife got an email saying a new system of booking was going to happen. She goes to the pool boss + suggests he learn the system, then put out a Utube video showing how it works. He told her that was a good idea.
Result: akwardization. Wife gets her slots booked, coz she is nimble with computers. Her friend phones, hopping mad, as system would not let her book. Two more friends phone, crying, coz they could not book.
Boss man never made a video on how to use the new deal. Wife gets free swimming, but the system charged her, thus necessitating her asking re refund.
Akwardization occurs east of Eden
Where little is double-checked
And
Good ideas lie bleeding