I'm doing a study of the Holy Spirit in John 14-16, and the New American Commentary on John 16:11 needs a correction. The section containing the errors is here:
The Johannine visions in the apocalypse vividly portray not only the great power of evil (12:3–4) and its seductive ways (13:1–18; 17:1–14) but also its unambiguous defeat (14:17–20; 19:11–21; 20:7–10).
The error is that the highlighted links direct the reader to passages in the Gospel of John, not in the Apocalypse, as the author intended. This needs to be corrected.